This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗

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This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗
This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.
这句话当结尾好吗

This is my favorite day,I think it's interesting.这句话当结尾好吗
意思是可以,但用词和语法上有问题.1.指示代词This应改用习惯用来指代时间的It,而且与后面的it一起,都表示所指代的是同一个名词(my favorite) day;2.后句之前必须用表示对比、意思为“(然)而”的连词while(去逗号);3.正式文章与前一致用it is(不用省略号');4.与前句平衡对比成the interesting one.
It is my favorite day while I think it is the interesting one.这是令我喜欢的一天,然而也是令我感兴趣的一天.