帮我检查一下这段文字有没有存在语法,句子等错误,请纠正!30分I can not remember what I do at this time last year,But the medicine bottle in the cupboard can tell me clearly ,It was at the beginning of this year that I brought th

帮我检查一下这段文字有没有存在语法,句子等错误,请纠正!30分I can not remember what I do at this time last year,But the medicine bottle in the cupboard can tell me clearly ,It was at the beginning of this year that I brought th
帮我检查一下这段文字有没有存在语法,句子等错误,请纠正!30分
I can not remember what I do at this time last year,But the
medicine bottle in the cupboard can tell me clearly ,It was at the
beginning of this year that I brought them back,pick up it,look like
yesterday's thing.
In 2004,it is the valley bottom in my life,then 2005,it is the
darkness before dawn .
In 2004,the misfortune again and again came to attack me ,I have
thought that the sky is grey ,it will be terrific tomorrow,will not
dare to imagine .I make a decision to duel with it,but has failed ,
my falling down again and again.
In 2005,the nightmare continues,I have put into all of mine and
resisted it.I am terrified ,helpless,disappointed.
On June 8 ,2005,a daily schedule is stuck on my cupboard door.
Three months later.
The miracle appeared ,the brilliant rays of dawn saw through the
border of the earth.this lets me understand ,the biggest
potentiality of the life is not activated by the medicine.
I have got well,but what disease bring brand really forever unable
to wipe.
In this year,few things have happened ,but all very deep and
eternal,someone understands me very much,someone knows
nothing about me,however,some things,maybe only myself is the
clearest .
The health is the good fortune ,no disease is happy!it will be
excellent that the life lives,treasure the health,treature the life.

帮我检查一下这段文字有没有存在语法,句子等错误,请纠正!30分I can not remember what I do at this time last year,But the medicine bottle in the cupboard can tell me clearly ,It was at the beginning of this year that I brought th
我大写的地方有要注意修改.
I can not remember what I DID at this time last year,but the medicine bottle in the cupboard REMINDS me clearly.
It was at the beginning of this year that I brought THEM(这里有浑乱,你用them是指什么?） back and PICKED IT UP.IT WAS JUST LIKE YESTERDAY.
The year 2004 was the low point in my life,then the year 2005 was the darkness before dawn.
In 2004,misfortunes attacked me again and again.I thought that the sky was grey ,and believed that it would be another terrible day tomorrow.I decided to fight all the misfortunes in my life,but I failed.As a result,I was even more depressed than before.
In 2005,the nightmare continues.I did everything to resist it,and I was terrified,helpless,and disappointed.
On June 8 ,2005,a daily schedule stucked on my cupboard door.
Three months later,miracle happened,and the brilliant rays of dawn sawed through the boundaries of the earth.This let me understood,that the biggest potential of life is not activated by medicine.
I have gotten well,but what this disease brought to my life will not be forgotten.
In this year,few things have happened ,but all of them were important:someone understands me very much,someone knows nothing about me,however,some things,maybe only to myself is the
clearest(that is quite an accurate statement).
Good health is a good fortune.Well being brings happyness!It is good to be alive.So treasure good health,and treature life.
唉...你写得真是不敢恭维...
我尽力帮你改了很多了,有什么问题随时问我.

没吗!

pick up it,should be pick it up,duel with should be deal with