谁帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法或拼写错误My plan for Winter VacationThe winter vacation is coming.All the children will be glad when the winter vacation is here.But how can I make my holiday fun and useful?This is my plan for my wi

谁帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法或拼写错误My plan for Winter VacationThe winter vacation is coming.All the children will be glad when the winter vacation is here.But how can I make my holiday fun and useful?This is my plan for my wi
谁帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法或拼写错误
My plan for Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is coming.All the children will be glad when the winter vacation is here.But how can I make my holiday fun and useful?This is my plan for my winter vacation.
I’ll get up at seven o’clock everyday and have my breakfast at half past seven.Then,I’ll do my homework from eight o’clock to half past nine.Half past nine to eleven o’clock is time for TV.At eleven o’clock,I’ll have lunch with my parents.Then I’ll go to bed to sleep until one p.m..After I get up,I will do my homework for two hours.Then I can play computer games for one hour.After the computer time,I can go out and play basketball with my friends for one and half an hour.Then I’ll have to go home and have supper with my parents.At enght p.m.,I will listen and reread English with my radio.At nine p.m.,I can read some books I like and go to bed at ten p.m..
In this winter vacation,I’m going to see the film with my classmates.And I am going to visit my folks in the Spring Festival.I can see my family members and have a lot of lucky money.I will give a present to my little brother.I hope I can finish in this vacation.Of course,I will have to finish all my homework!
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谁帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法或拼写错误My plan for Winter VacationThe winter vacation is coming.All the children will be glad when the winter vacation is here.But how can I make my holiday fun and useful?This is my plan for my wi
1.Half past nine to eleven o’clock is time for TV 这句开头加一个from
2.Then I’ll go to bed to sleep until one p.m bed后面的to改为and或者 把to sleep删了,意思重复
3.After I get up 是getting
4.I will listen and reread English with my radio with改为by
正确的：
My plan for Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is coming.All the children will be glad when the winter vacation is here.But how can I make my holiday fun and useful?This is my plan for my winter vacation.
I’ll get up at seven o’clock everyday and have my breakfast at half past seven.Then,I’ll do my homework from eight o’clock to half past nine.From half past nine to eleven o’clock is time for TV.At eleven o’clock,I’ll have lunch with my parents.Then I’ll go to bed until one p.m..After I getting up,I will do my homework for two hours.Then I can play computer games for one hour.After the computer time,I can go out and play basketball with my friends for one and half an hour.Then I’ll have to go home and have supper with my parents.At enght p.m.,I will listen and reread English by my radio.At nine p.m.,I can read some books I like and go to bed at ten p.m..
In this winter vacation,I’m going to see the film with my classmates.And I am going to visit my folks in the Spring Festival.I can see my family members and have a lot of lucky money.I will give a present to my little brother.I hope I can finish in this vacation.Of course,I will have to finish all my homework!

不是everyday是every day做副词
go to sleep
用can感觉怪异，好像是父母指定做什么，用will比较好
After I get up=After getting up.both is OK