2010年12月英语四级的作文,这样写算不算脱题了1现在父母为孩子包办一切2应该怎么样帮助孩子独立 我第1段开了头,第2段是分2点写这个现象为什么存在,第3段写应该怎么做...这样第2段是不是

2010年12月英语四级的作文,这样写算不算脱题了1现在父母为孩子包办一切2应该怎么样帮助孩子独立 我第1段开了头,第2段是分2点写这个现象为什么存在,第3段写应该怎么做...这样第2段是不是
2010年12月英语四级的作文,这样写算不算脱题了
1现在父母为孩子包办一切2应该怎么样帮助孩子独立 我第1段开了头,第2段是分2点写这个现象为什么存在,第3段写应该怎么做...这样第2段是不是算脱题了呢?一般作文都有几分呢?还有..我作文题目没写~哎,

2010年12月英语四级的作文,这样写算不算脱题了1现在父母为孩子包办一切2应该怎么样帮助孩子独立 我第1段开了头,第2段是分2点写这个现象为什么存在,第3段写应该怎么做...这样第2段是不是
有点偏,它是说家长怎样帮孩子自立,你第二段写为什么存在算是脱题,不过第三段转回来了,应该有及格分数吧……我也不确定
那个作文题目它已经帮我们写好了,我们不用写

阅卷的时候谁看你偏题没啊，放心吧。只要有点接近就行了。

没题目没事的 应该还能及格吧

Help Children to Be Independent
Today in China, many families have only one child. So the children usually doted upon by all family members. Gradually some of them get used to depending on their...

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Help Children to Be Independent
Today in China, many families have only one child. So the children usually doted upon by all family members. Gradually some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently.
There are some ways to help children to be independent. Firstly, the child should have a chance to see the world around him. He must understand that therere various competitions in this world, and everyone can find his right position in the society only by individual efforts. Secondly, the parents should give the child enough help to make him feel comfortable. Its impossible to ask a child not to depend on parents at once. A child needs help from the beginning. Without any help, the child may lose his faith. Thirdly, parents should let his child make decisions, which can temper his ability to deal with problems. A child should be praised when he is successful or when he fails.
To be independent is good for the children, because no parents can accompany the children for the whole life. It is the child himself who is responsible for her own fate. Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.

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我也是这么写的，我觉第二段是陈述父母为孩子包办这一切的原因，也不知道有没有偏题！我有些担心啊！