懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误Stranger:whats your name?You:I do not speak English,each response may be a long time,please waitStranger:okayYou:I help you,and I have the names of relations?Stranger:i need help,i want to get my

懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误Stranger:whats your name?You:I do not speak English,each response may be a long time,please waitStranger:okayYou:I help you,and I have the names of relations?Stranger:i need help,i want to get my
懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误
Stranger:whats your name?
You:I do not speak English,each response may be a long time,please wait
Stranger:okay
You:I help you,and I have the names of relations?
Stranger:i need help,i want to get my friend back
You:I also want to help you,but how can I help you do
Stranger:where do you come from?
You:I am a Chinese
Stranger:i love asians
You:I am in china
You:What do you want me to do
Stranger:can you tell me how i can get my friend back?
Stranger:you are lucky,you live in a beautiful place then
You:Well,Shaanxi Province in central China,is indeed a beautiful city
Stranger:i wish i could visit china one day
You:You are most welcome to come to China,there are many beautiful places,some make you linger from
Stranger:yes i bet china is an amazing country.have you ever been to europe?
You:I am sorry I did not go
Stranger:maybe you can visit one day,you would like it
You:I so believe,I hope so after I graduated from college,to have the opportunity to travel to Europe,I believe it will definitely be very hot unforgettable spiritual journey
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懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误Stranger:whats your name?You:I do not speak English,each response may be a long time,please waitStranger:okayYou:I help you,and I have the names of relations?Stranger:i need help,i want to get my
楼上滴,
就是 can you tell me how i can get my friend back?这句是对的.
can you tell me后面句子是陈述语序~
第二个也是对的,would like do sth,..
there are many beautiful places,some make you linger from
我觉得应该是 There are many beautiful places,some of which make you ...那是两个句子,说着加句号分成两句.不过我觉得我那样改的更标准~
I also want to help you,but how can I help you do
应该是but how can I help you,
each response may be a long time
我觉得 may take a long time 要好点吧~

Stranger: can you tell me how i can get my friend back?
应改为can you tell me how can i get my friend back
Stranger: maybe you can visit one day, you would like
应把would改为will