谁帮我看一下这篇英语演讲有没有语法错误或不妥的地方?Hello,everyone.Today i want to introduce an American drama to everyone.It names SHERLOCK Holmes.It was popular and famous in China.As we all known,Sherlock is the most famous

谁帮我看一下这篇英语演讲有没有语法错误或不妥的地方?Hello,everyone.Today i want to introduce an American drama to everyone.It names SHERLOCK Holmes.It was popular and famous in China.As we all known,Sherlock is the most famous
谁帮我看一下这篇英语演讲有没有语法错误或不妥的地方?
Hello,everyone.
Today i want to introduce an American drama to everyone.It names SHERLOCK Holmes.It was popular and famous in China.As we all known,Sherlock is the most famous detective in the world.But in this drama,the detective is different from the book.We may think the detective must be popular and friendly.But in this drama,Sherlock is a lonely guy.He is not popular and friendly,and Jhon Waston is the only friend with him.
In this drama,we can watch Sherlock and Waston how they destroy one by one enemy.And how the stroy exciting are.
This drama’s story is different from the book.The author create a new story and new character.I think this is the most important reason why this drama are so popular.And i hope the author will create more great story that the audience can watch more exciting,interesting story.
That’s all,thank you!
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谁帮我看一下这篇英语演讲有没有语法错误或不妥的地方?Hello,everyone.Today i want to introduce an American drama to everyone.It names SHERLOCK Holmes.It was popular and famous in China.As we all known,Sherlock is the most famous
It is SHERLOCK Holmes（化繁为简,意思到位）
We must think that the detective is popular and friendly.（我们一定认为侦探是.你的原话老外会晕的）
and Jhon Waston is the only friend to him.（对他来说,with相对缺乏感情上的意思）
we can watch Sherlock and Waston how they destroy enemies one by one,and how the stroy exciting are.（这是演讲不是诗歌.宾语enemies不要和副词one by one随便颠倒顺序.而且enemy是可数要么前面加冠词要么用复数,而且后面有语法错误,And how the stroy exciting are.这和前面的句子意思连在一起为什么要把and大写而且还独立成句?这不是感叹句）
The author creates 注意单复数.
more great stories 注意单复数!
that the audience 为什么要加the?前面有提到过吗?孩纸8要随便加the
interesting stories 单复数.

lt named sherlock holmes.
john watson is his only friend.
we can see ~and ~how they destroyed enemies one by one. and how the story exciting are.
最后一句中 用greater 去掉more
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lt named sherlock holmes.
john watson is his only friend.
we can see ~and ~how they destroyed enemies one by one. and how the story exciting are.
最后一句中 用greater 去掉more
去掉最后的more exciting,interesting story

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