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R:  cds memoir  not accurate.

1. not wealthy———borrow $
2. doubt conversation’saccuracy. 
3. not escape ceiling———bribe jailers———manypolitically friend.

L:  accurate.

    1.not poor———party & gambling. 不动产变现期间借钱。

    2.write every night———keep manyyears.  witnesses confirm

    3.其他人也有powerful朋友但没逃出去。

      cds逃走后，监狱repair了ceiling.

  Thelecturer claims that the Chevalier’s memoir is veryaccurate. This claim isnot in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggeststhat the memoir of Chevalier are not as the same of his reallife.

  First, the lecturer arguesthat Chevalier were not poor because he had lots of parties andgambling. Lots of his wealth are not cash, so Chevalier had toborrow money when he waited the cash reach. Clearly, theprofessor"s argument disproves its counterpart in the reading thatChevalier is not wealthy because there has evidence indicates thatChevalier borrowed money from a merchant.

  Second, the speaker discussesChevalier wrote journal every night, and then keep the journal manyyears. There were witnesses confirm, definitely, Chevalier has theconversation with Voltaire. It is contradicting what is stated inthe reading that there has any doubt about the conversation betweenChevalier and Voltaire, because critics think Chevalier was notable to remember the detail of this conversation after so manyyears.

  Finally, the speaker raisesthe issue that there were other prisoners who had more powerfulfriends did not left the prison by bribing, and the prison hadrepaired the ceiling of Chevalier’s prison room, which was simplynoted as Chevalier did not escape  from the holeof the ceiling of his prison in the reading.   222

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readingTowardtheendofhislife,theChevalierdeSeingalt(1725-1798)wrotealongmemoirrecountinghislifeandadventures.TheChevalierwasasomewhatcontroversialfigure,butsincehemetmanyfamouspeople,includingkingsandwriters,hismemoirhasbecomeavaluablehistoricalsourceaboutEuropeansocietyintheeighteenthcentury.However,somecriticshaveraiseddoubtsabouttheaccuracyofthememoir.TheyclaimthattheChevalierdistortedorinventedmanyeventsinthememoirtomakehislifeseemmoreexcitingandglamorousthanitreallywas.

Forexample,inhismemoirtheChevalierclaimsthatwhilelivingin

Switzerland,hewasverywealthy,anditisknownthathespentagreatdealofmoneythereonpartiesandgambling.

However,evidencehasrecentlysurfacedthattheChevalierborrowedconsiderablesumsofmoneyfromaSwissmerchant.CriticsthusarguethatiftheChevalierhadreallybeenveryrich,hewouldnothaveneededtoborrowmoney.

CriticsarealsoskepticalabouttheaccuracyoftheconversationsthattheChevalierrecordsinthememoirbetweenhimselfandthefamouswriter

Voltaire.NoonedoubtsthattheChevalierandVoltairemetandconversed.However,criticscomplainthatthememoircannotpossiblycapturetheseconversationsaccurately,becauseitwaswrittenmanyyearsaftertheconversationsoccurred.Criticspointoutthatitisimpossibletorememberexactphrasesfromextendedconversationsheldmanyyearsearlier.

Criticshavealsoquestionedthememoir'saccountoftheChevalier's

escapefromanotoriousprisoninVenice,Italy.HeclaimstohaveescapedtheVenetianprisonbyusingapieceofmetaltomakeaholeintheceilingandclimbingthroughtheroof.Criticsclaimthatwhilesuchadaringescapemakesforenjoyablereading,itismorelikelythattheChevaliersjailerswerebribedtofreehim.TheypointoutthattheChevalierhadanumberofpoliticallywell-connectedfriendsinVenicewhocouldhaveofferedabribe.

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Professor:Nomemoircanpossiblybecorrectineverydetail,butstill,theChevalier'smemoirisprettyaccurateoverall,andis,byandlarge,areliablehistoricalsource.Let'slookattheaccuracyofthethreeepisodesmentionedinthereading.

First,theloanfromthemerchant.Well,thatdoesn'tmeanthattheChevalierwaspoor.Letmeexplain.WeknowthatinSwitzerland,the

Chevalierspenthugeamountsofmoneyonpartiesandgambling,andhehadwealth.Butitwasakindofpropertyyouhavetosellfirsttogetmoney.Soitusuallytookafewdaystoconverthisassetsintoactualmoney.Sowhenheranoutofcash,hehadtoborrowsomewhilehewaswaitingforhismoneytoarrive,butthat'snotbeingpoor.

Second,theconversationswithVoltaire.TheChevalierstatesinhismemoirthateachnightimmediatelyafterconversingwithVoltaire,hewrotedowneverythinghecouldrememberaboutthatparticularnight'sconversation.EvidentlytheChevalierkepthisnotesofthese

conversationsformanyyearsandreferredtothemwhenwritingthememoir.WitnesseswholivedwiththeChevalierinhislaterlifeconfirmedthatheregularlyconsultednotesandjournalswhencomposingthememoir.

Third,theChevalier'sescapefromaprisoninVenice.Otherprisonersinthatprisonhadevenmorepowerfulfriendsthanhedid,andnoneofthemwereeverabletobribetheirwaytofreedom,sobriberyhardlyseemslikelyinhiscase.Thebestevidence,though,comesfromsomeoldVenetiangovernmentdocuments.TheyindicatethatsoonaftertheChevalierescapedfromtheprison,theceilingofhisoldprisonroomhadtobe

repaired.Whywouldtheyneedtorepairaceilingunlesshehadescapedexactlyashesaidhedid.

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OntheissueaboutwhetherChevalier'smemoirisaccurateinitscontent,theprofessorandtheauthorholdutterlyoppositeview.TheauthordeemsthatactuallytherearethreeaspectsworthdoubtingabouttheaccuracyofChevalier'swritingwhiletheprofessorutilizesevidencestorefutethethreepointsmentionedinthereadingpassagerespectively.

First,itisstatedbytheauthorthatintruthChevalieronceborrowedalargeamountofmoneyfromaSwissbusinessman,sohe'slesslikelytobeasopulentashesaidinhismemoir.Nevertheless,theprofessorpointsoutthatthisloanmaybeattributedtoChevalier'stemporarylackofmoneybecauseheneededtosellproductstogetmoney,anditwouldtakesometimebeforehecouldgainenoughcashtoparticipateinpartiesandgambling.

Second,contrarytothedemonstrationinthereadingpassagethatthereisnochanceforChevaliertoremembersomuchdetailsintheconversationwithwriterVoltairesomanyyearsbeforeChevalieractuallywrotethememoir,theprofessorcomesupwiththefactthateachnightafterhavingtalkswithVoltaire,Chevalierwrotedownsomeprecisedetailsthatworth

recording.WhenChevalierfinallysetdowntothememoir,heoftenreferredtothenoteshehadwrittendownbefore.

Finally,theauthorconsidersChevalier’sescapefromainfamousjailasasuccessinbriberatherthanaoutcomeofmakingaholeintheceilingandclimbingthroughtheroof.However,theprofessormentionsthatthoseprisonerswhohadmorepowerfulfriendstohelpthemcouldn'tmakeittoescapefromtheprison,sohowcouldChevalierultimatelymanagedtodoso?Also,thereisanofficialdocumentsayingthatatthetimeafterChevalier’sescape,theceilingofthejailwasrepaired,andthatpreciselymatchedtheescapeofChevalier.

ThereadingpassageraisesseveraldoubtsabouttheaccuracyofthememoirwrittenbytheChevalierdeSeingalt,whereastheprofessordefendsthememoirinthelecturebyclarifyingtheseemingcontradictionsintheChevalier’saccounts.

TheprofessorarguesthatbecausetheChevalierwasrichinassetsbutpoorincashwhilehewaslivinginSwitzerland,heoccasionallyhadtoborrowfundstopayforexpensiverecreationalactivities.Accordingtotheprofessor,havinglowamountsofcashisnotthesameasbeingfinanciallypoor.Thereading,however,holdsthatassomeonewhohadtoborrowlarge

篇二：29分作文之综合写作模板

笔记内容

阅读分论点一听力分论点一

逻辑链细节

阅读分论点二听力分论点一

逻辑链细节

阅读分论点三听力分论点一

逻辑链细节

文章结构

TPO1综合写作：职员一般执行的一周五天，每天八小时工作制。政策要求企业提供薪水八成并且工作四天的工作方式。这个对国家经济，对公司，对个人都是有好处的。

TPO2综合写作：在很多机构里，恰当完成一个新项目的最好方法可能是组成一个团队。一个团队来完成项目有几个优势。

Thepassagearguesthat_________________________.Butinthelecture,theprofessorholdsatotallydifferentviewthat____________.

Firstly,thepassagesaysthat_______________________.However,thelecturepointsoutthat_______________.Thatisbecause____________.

Secondly,thepassageclaimsthat____________________,for________________.Thelecturerefutestheideacompletely.Admittedly(公认的),itis(orthereare)__________.Inaddition,________________.

Thirdly,thepassagesuggeststhat____________________________.Though___________,thelecturearguesagainstthepassage._________________。And_____________because____________.

艺术(基于事实)

TPO3综合写作：伦勃朗是著名的画家。对于有些画作是否确实出自他手却是颇有争议的。这幅画中存在的一些问题却表明这幅画不是伦勃朗的作品。

TPO8综合写作：塞恩加尔骑士在晚年写了一部长篇回忆录以描写他冒险的一生。其实先生是一个充满争议的人物。然而，一些评论家对这本回忆的准确性提出了质疑。他们认为其实先生为了让他的一生显得更富有传奇性，虚构和编纂了很多事件。

参考句子：Theinconsistencybetween___（事实的正确与否）____,andthe____（事实的正确与否）______dissolvesastheprofessorexplainsthat______________________.

参考模板：

Thereadingpassageraisesseveraldoubtsabout_________,whereas(然而),theprofessordefends_____byclarifyingtheseemingcontradictionsin_（主体事物）_.

Theprofessorarguesthat__________.Accordingtotheprofessor,____________.Thereading,however,holdsthat_________

Moreover,theprofessorchallengestheskepticism(怀疑的态度)expressedinthereadingregardingthe___________.Sheexplainsthat_______________.

Finally,theprofessorrejectstheclaiminthereadingthat__________.Shesaysthatthefactthat__________showsthat_________.Furthermore,shepointsto_________,citingthisasstrongevidencethat__(lecture的观点)____________.

自然科学（论证假设）

TPO4综合写作：恒温动物是指诸如现代鸟类和哺乳动物这种可以保持体温恒定的动物。恐龙在很多地方都同现在的爬行动物不一致。同时，现在有大量的证据表明恐龙其实是恒温动物。

TPO10综合写作：海狮是一种小型海洋哺乳动物。几年前，阿拉斯加海岸的海狮数量急剧减少。专家开始研究还是数量下降的原因，并且很快发现了两个可能的原因，分别是环境污染和天敌捕食。不过，环境污染说看起来更为可信。

Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthat_________________.Theywere(oritis)_______________.Theprofessorcontradictstheissuesof_________________.Shesaysthat_________________________.During_________shesaysthatthereis_____________.

Theissueof______________________________beingusedasareasontoclassifythe__恐龙_______as____恒温动物_____doesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthat_____________.

Theprofessoracknowledges_____(承认某个内容)_______________,butalsopointsoutthat______________.Thethickeningindicatesthatsthwerenot_______________________butwere.Thispattern,shesays,_____________

Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsasto(至于)whyshethinksthatsthisnotsth.

Thelecturerandthereadingpassagesuggesttwocompetingtheories,___theoryvs.___theory,toexplain(why)______________.

Theprofessorreasonsthat_________isnotcausedby______butratherby_________.Incontrast,thereadingpassageattributes________to________,citingevidenceof_________.

Furthermore,thelecturerarguesthat_______arelikelyfactorsin_______,because__________.Thereadingpassage,ontheotherhand,rulesoutthistheorybasedon______________,andinsteadapprovesofthe_____theoryastheonlyexplanationfor_________.

Finally,accordingtothelecturer,________________.However,thereadingpassagearguesthat__________factors,whichleadto________,betterexplains_________

考古，历史解释(关于用途的三个理论)

TPO5综合写作：美国西南部的查科峡谷的居民以他们的“巨屋”有名。很多考古学家都试图解释这些建筑的用途。尽管业界尚未达成一致，但现在有三个比较有竞争力的理论。

Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsof____________.

Thelecturer,however,pointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.

Thelecturerarguesthat_________,indicatingthat_______________.Thereading,however,drawscomparisonsbetween____and____insupportofthe“___theory”.

Thesecondtheory,thatthehouseswereusedfor_____________,isalsorejectedbythelecturer.Heexplainsthataplacethat__________,whichis______________.Thisprovesthatthe“___theory”isunlikely.

Finally,regardingthethirdtheory,the“____theory”,thelecturercontends(争论；主张)thatthepresenceof________________doesnotoffersufficientproofthatthiswas__________.Hearguesthatthereare_______________,whichsuggestthat___________thesewereprobablynotusedforsthbutinsteadwerediscardedbyworkers.

篇三：新托福TPO综合写作详细解析汇总

新托福TPO综合写作详细解析汇总

在新托福综合写作中，有的同学语言使用的能力还有一定局限，还要刻意追求句式的复杂化，但这样的后果就是写出来的句子个个都有错，个个都有表达不清。其实用最好的词表达最多的内容才是最厉害的写作方式，本文小编为大家整理了一篇新托福综合写作范文，来源于TPO1—15。

新托福综合写作范文TPO2详细解析:团队的作用

新托福综合写作范文TPO3详细解析:伦勃朗

新托福综合写作范文TPO4详细解析:恒温动物

新托福综合写作范文TPO5详细解析:查科峡谷的巨屋

新托福综合写作范文TPO6详细解析:在线百科的利弊

新托福综合写作范文TPO7详细解析:环保认证在美国无用

新托福综合写作范文TPO8详细解析:塞恩加尔骑士

新托福综合写作范文TPO9详细解析:氢燃料

新托福综合写作范文TPO10详细解析:海獭数量减少的原因

新托福综合写作范文TPO11详细解析:人们不爱读书了

新托福综合写作范文TPO12详细解析:简·奥斯汀

新托福综合写作范文TPO13详细解析:私人化石买卖的坏处

新托福综合写作范文TPO14详细解析:回收性砍伐

新托福综合写作范文TPO15详细解析:控制蔗蜍数量的方法

新托福综合写作对语言的要求是清晰表达，准确转述即可(其实独立写作的要求也类似)。没有必要一味地追求语言的华丽，把话说清楚最重要。

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篇四：综合写作TPO提纲(1-10)