帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误Hello Kitty is a very cute cat.Her birthday is November 1st.She is open and clear.She always wears a smile on her face and looks happy.She always wears a pretty small butterfly bow.he can play tennis and the

帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误Hello Kitty is a very cute cat.Her birthday is November 1st.She is open and clear.She always wears a smile on her face and looks happy.She always wears a pretty small butterfly bow.he can play tennis and the
帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误
Hello Kitty is a very cute cat.Her birthday is November 1st.She is open and clear.She always wears a smile on her face and looks happy.She always wears a pretty small butterfly bow.he can play tennis and the piano very well.Her favorite subjects are English and music.She wants to be a poet or a musician.There are six people in Kitty’s family:her parents,her grandparents and her sister Mimmy.Mimmy is Kitty’s twin sister.Mimmy is a quiet girl.
I think Kitty is a very cute cat.I’m very like Hello Kitty.
这是我英语课前演讲要用的,自己写的,看看有没有错误.

帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误Hello Kitty is a very cute cat.Her birthday is November 1st.She is open and clear.She always wears a smile on her face and looks happy.She always wears a pretty small butterfly bow.he can play tennis and the
最后一句很明显错了...
I’m very like Hello Kitty改为I very like Hello Kitty 或者 I like Hello Kitty very much .
还有前面的he can play tennis 应该是she

he can play tennis ，这里是she不是he
最后说i like hello kitty very much，而不是very like

我来帮你把语法，语句等问题全部修正一下吧。
Hello Kitty is a very cute cat. Her birthday falls on the first day of November. She is open and clever. She always wears a smile on her face and seems happy. She often wears...

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我来帮你把语法，语句等问题全部修正一下吧。
Hello Kitty is a very cute cat. Her birthday falls on the first day of November. She is open and clever. She always wears a smile on her face and seems happy. She often wears a small and pretty butterfly bow. She can play tennis and piano very well. Her favorite subjects are English and music. She wants to be a poet or a musician. There are six people in Kitty’s family: her parents, her grandparents and her sister Mimmy. Mimmy is Kitty’s twin sister. She is a quiet girl.
I think Kitty is a very adorable cat. I like Hello Kitty very much.

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