五星作文作文

精选作文:五星作文作文

晚上JOJO让我读读他的五星作文，还特别说让我认真读后给他些评语，我才意识到这学期我都没有如以前那样坐下来跟他一起讨论作文了，他似乎也没有过这样的特别要求了。以前有作文作业的时候他总会说，妈咪，我们来写作文吧。说来惭愧这学期我的大部分注意力都放在忙自己的事情上，他似乎也挺理解，回家写的作文很少有我的意见了。

这两篇五星作文是在学校完成的现场作文。一篇是想象文，一篇是说明文。老师备注了评语。有些错别字。读完后我真为他感到高兴，对他说，你完全可以独立写出五星作文了，妈咪觉得你很棒，虽然以前我们经常为作文引起唇舌之战，看来不是白战的。

篇一：全能五星英语作文范文

MyIdealJob

Therearevariouskindsofjobsintheword,suchaswriting,nursing,teachingandengineering.Butdifferentpeoplechoosedifferentjobsastheiridealcareers.

Asforme,Ihavemadeupmymindtobeateacher.IwanttoteachbecauseIlikethepaceofacademiccalendarandIcanhavetheopportunitytokeeponlearning.Besides,beingaroundthestudentsIcangrowandchangewiththem.

Butteachingisnotaneasyjobatall.Imuststudycleverlytoobtainmoreknowledge.Iamsurethatmyidealwillcomestrue.

MyHobby

Myfavoritehobbyisreading,arewardingexperienceandithaschangedmealot!

IlovedreadingwhenIwasayoungsterandIalwayshookedbythecharacterorthesoulbecauseIthinkeverybookisalifeandit’saperfectfriendifyouappreciateher.Wecancommunicatewithherinwardlyandreapthebenefitwehaveneverthought.

Readingalsocangivemesomeusefulaidsandhelpsometimes.ThemoreandwilderIread,themoreIwillget.Ispentmyvaluabletimetoread.Andthen,itcultivatesmytaste.Idofeellikereading.

ItwasSunday.WhenRosewenthome,itwasrainingheavily.Rosewasridingabicycle.Suddenlyshefelldownbecauseofthewetroadandhurtherknee.Rosecouldn'tmovebecouseofthepain.Atthattime,apolicemansawthisandwalkedtoheratonce.Hestoppedataxiandsethertothehospital.InthehospitalthedoctorlookedherovercarefullyandtoldRosethehurtwasnotserious.Rosewassogratefulthatshethankedthepolicemanagainandagain.

篇二：五星级作文评价标准

五星级作文评价标准

我的点评

你的习作：

题目吸引人；（十分、比较、不够）语句通顺；（十分、比较、不够）语句精彩；（十分、比较、不够）

故事完整；（十分、比较、不够）描写生动。（十分、比较、不够）

描写时能抓住进行描写，很不错哟！我的总评：☆☆☆☆☆

我的希望：还要努力哟！□祝你再创佳作！□

评价人：

老师的话：

五星级作文评价标准

我的点评

你的习作：

题目吸引人；（十分、比较、不够）语句通顺；（十分、比较、不够）语句精彩；（十分、比较、不够）

故事完整；（十分、比较、不够）描写生动。（十分、比较、不够）

描写时能抓住进行描写，很不错哟！我的总评：☆☆☆☆☆

我的希望：还要努力哟！□祝你再创佳作！□

评价人：

老师的话：

篇三：小学作文：五星红旗高高飘扬

五星红旗高高飘扬

每当看见五星红旗高高飘扬的时候，我就会想到一些让人难忘的事情：

今年的雅典奥运会，每当我们的中国健儿赢得金牌后，赛场上空就会响起中国的国歌，升起中国的国旗——五星红旗。这时，我就会和大家一样情不自禁地欢呼起来。这激动人心的五星红旗代表了我们祖国的强大，值得我们每一个中国人自豪。因为从59年容国团打破零的开始，到今年我们中国挤进了

严肃地高举右手笔直地站着庄重地看着在缓缓升起的五星红旗。

我希望我们中国人不管是谁，都要尊重五星红旗，而不要……

篇四：无老师五星作文词汇

形容词/副词

Important:essential,significant★★★★★,vital,crucial★★★★★,profound★★★★★,playapushingrole,indispensable,requisite,critical★★★★★,fundamental★★★★★,primary,elementary,underlying,rudimentary★★★★★,basically,necessary…

Angry:annoyed★★★★★,cross,displeased,enraged,exasperated★★★★★,incensed,infuriated,irate,mad(informal),livid(informal),berserk,outraged★★★★★,resentful★★★★★…

Big:gigantic★★★★★,massive★★★★★,colossal,enormous,immense★★★★★,gargantuan,tremendous★★★★★,titanic,giant,vast,large,huge,monster,bulky,

Good:marvelous,fabulous,gorgeous,spectacular★★★★★,outstanding★★★★★,distinguished,remarkable★★★★★,superb,incredible,unbelievable,outofthis

world,magnificent★★★★★,charmin★★★★★g,stunning,fantastic★★★★★,terrific,excellent,great,wonderful,amazing,awesome

Many:numerous,myriad★★★★★,infinite,

Forever(adv):infinity,eternal,timeless★★★★★,everlasting★★★★★，undying,endless,changeless,perpetually★★★★★

Small:minimum,diminutive★★★★★,minute★★★★★,petite,wee,undersized,teeny,tiny,little,petite（女子身高娇小）

Bad:awful★★★★★,terrible,dreadful,defective,faulty,imperfect★★★★★,

inadequate★★★★★,poor,substandard,unsatisfactory★★★★★,harmful,damaging,deleterious,detrimental,hurtful,ruinous,unhealthy,evil,immoral（此词的意思是“不道德的”，请用于适当场合）★★★★★…

Beautiful:charming★★★★★,charismatic★★★★★,attractive,gorgeous,pretty,endearing,sweet★★★★★,adorable,eye-catching★★★★★,handsome,hot,cute,good-looking,lovable,engaging…

Clever:brilliant,knowledgeable★★★★★,intellectual,intelligent★★★★★,

excellent,bright,smart

Happy:delightful★★★★★,delectable,elated,glad,overjoyed★★★★★,pleased,jubilant★★★★★,merry,joyful,

Fast：swift★★★★★,quick,rapid,speedy★★★★★,hasty,nippy,likelightning★★★★★,

Hurry(v):hustle★★★★★,rush★★★★★,makehaste,tear,steponit,dash,getamoveon,steponit,scoot.

Clear:obvious,apparent,blatant,comprehensible★★★★★,conspicuous★★★★★,distinct,evident,manifest,palpable,plain,pronounced★★★★★,recognizable,transparent,intelligible★★★★★,lucid,plain,understandable★★★★★,uninvolved,simple,…

Easy:simple,effortless★★★★★,notrouble,painless★★★★★,plainsailing,uncomplicated★★★★★,undemanding,unproblematic,apieceofcake(informal),child’splay(informal),…

Dangerous:perilous,breakneck,chancy(informal),hazardous★★★★★,insecure,precarious,risky,unsafe,vulnerable★★★★★

Personally：frommypersonalperspective★★★★★,asfarasIamconcerned,frommypointofview,frommyangle★★★★★,consider,conceive,perspective★★★★★…

Direct:bald★★★★★,basic,frank,naked,plain★★★★★,sincere★★★★★,stark,straightforward,candid,forthright,outspoken….

Difficult:hard,tricky,complicated★★★★★,complex,intricate★★★★★,involved,knotty,perplexin★★★★★g,puzzling,thorny…

动词

Think(that):hold★★★★★the(opinion/belief/position/standpoint/idea)that,

assume,believe,deem,reckon,argue,maintain★★★★★,suppose,conceive,insist(坚定认为）★★★★★,beconvinced,tomyknowledge,

Show:convey★★★★★,reveal★★★★★,express,corroborate,justify,imply,

verify,clarify,signify,exemplify,illuminate,substantiate,demonstrate,elucidate,denote★★★★★,characterizedas,instruct,display,disclose★★★★★,indicate,means,explain,givean/aexample(reason,explanation)of,bearout,pointout,pointtoward…

Know:realize,comprehend,identify,distinguish,discern,notice,perceive,recognize,see,understand,figureout,beacquaintedwith,befamiliarwith,

Get:acquire,attain★★★★★,achieve（本词其实很棒，但是只限于艰苦努力后的获得）,obtain,gain★★★★★

Suggest:haveaproposalin,

Increase:magnify★★★★★,expand,proliferate,mushroom,improve,enhance,advance★★★★★

Affect:Impress★★★★★,inspire,influence★★★★★,imprintof,impact★★★★★Stop:halt★★★★★,cease★★★★★,desist,end,pause,putanendto★★★★★,quit,refrain,shutdown,terminate★★★★★…

Make:create★★★★★,assemble,built,construct★★★★★,form★★★★★,manufacture;

fore,cause★★★★★,compel,constrain★★★★★,drive,impel,induce,oblige,prevail,upon,require…

Give:present★★★★★,award,contribute,deliver,donate★★★★★,grant,handover,handout,provide,supply

Break：separate,burst,crack★★★★★,destroy,disintegrate,fracture★★★★★,fragment,shatter★★★★★,smash,snap

Destroy:ruin★★★★★,raze,annihilate,crush★★★★★,demolish,devastate★★★★★,eradicate,shatter,wipeout,wreck★★★★★,obliterate,weaken,undermine★★★★★…

Happen:occur,comeabout★★★★★,cometopass,develop,result,takeplace,transpire

连接词

irstly:previously,beforehand,foremost,initially★★★★★,originally,formerly（后面须有相对应的latterly）,principally,mainly,essentially,basically,fundamentally★★★★★,tobeginwith,tostartwith,attheoutset…

Then:subsequently★★★★★,afterward,thereafter,afterthat,succeeding(adj.),whatismore,furthermore(furthermore)…

Lastly:ultimately★★★★★,eventually,inconclusion,toconclude,asafinalpoint,lastofall…

Too:aswell(句末),inaddition（句前）,besides（句前）,moreover（句前）,additionally（句前）★★★★★…

And（这些换用多用在句子间连接）:plus,aswellas,alongwith,inaddition★★★★★,bonus,with…

Or（这些换用多用在句子间连接）:otherwise,ifnot,before,orelse…

So(adv):therefore★★★★★,thus,consequently,accordingly,asaresult,forthatreason,hence

Because:as,dueto★★★★★（后面只能接宾语，不能接句子）,since★★★★★,asto,inthat,forthereasonthat,for,nowthat…

But:however（换用的时候需要注意与but的区别）,moreover,nevertheless★★★★★,nonetheless★★★★★,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,让步although,eventhought,though,evenif,while,despitethefactthat★★★★★…

Only:just,merely,barely★★★★★,singly,solely,rarely★★★★★…

Without:excluding★★★★★…

Very:extremely★★★★★,acutely,decidedly,deeply,exceedingly,greatly,highly,uncommonly,profoundly★★★★★,unusually…

Actually:asamatteroffact★★★★★,infact,inpointoffact,inreality,literally★★★★★,truly…

名词

Problem:issue★★★★★,case,trouble,difficulty,dilemma（注意与Problem之间差别）.

Meeting:conference★★★★★,discussion,assembly,conclave,congress,convention★★★★★,gatheringsession,assignation★★★★★,encounter,confrontation,argument,controversy…

Study:lessons,research,schoolwork,examination,analysis★★★★★（此词仅有名词词性,consideration,contemplation,inspection,investigation★★★★★,knowledge,scholarship…

Advantage:benefit,dominance,precedence,profit,superiority,merit…

Disadvantage:shortcoming★★★★★,weakness,inconvenience,drawback★★★★★,deficiency,flaw★★★★★,handicap(alsov.妨碍),downside,limitation.

Life:existence★★★★★,conduct,lifestyle★★★★★,wayoflife