原创范文6作文

精选作文:原创范文6作文

作为一个中学生, 你肯定经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 请你根据提示内容,

简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度, 并结合自身实际, 说明你的观点.

态度一：当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力。

态度二： 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。

你的观点：失败乃成功之母, ……

要求: 1. 词数: 120词左右.

    2. 可根据内容要求适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.

As high school students, we all have taken exams of differenttypes（我们都已经参加过不同类型的考试） and experienced success as well as failure.Different students hold different attitudes towards failure inexams.

Some students lose heart(失去信心) in the face of failure（面对失败）andeven get tired of study. Finally, they don’t work hard anymore. 

Fortunately(幸运的是), other students try hard to find the realreasons for their failure and encourage themselves to become moreconfident. As a result, they avoid(避免，后面接doing) making the samemistakes and make great progress.

As far as I’m concerned(在我看来), I believe that failure is themother of success. As long as（只要） we don’t give up and make effortsto improve(改进) our ways of learning, we can surely turn(把…变成) ourdreams into reality（把梦想变为现实）.

篇一：人教版三年级上册

春天，公园里树上的叶子发芽了，草地上不知名的小花开花了，红的，黄的，白的，紫的…….美丽极了。小河里，机灵的小鱼在水草旁嬉戏，有时候还会跃出水面向人们点头。小燕子也从南方飞回来了，叽叽喳喳正在盖窝呢。

夏天，树木长得密密麻麻的，树阴下，老爷爷们在唱歌，他们是那么的快乐，连树上的小鸟都想跟他们比赛。旁边的小朋友一边吃冰淇淋，一边玩耍。小狗也热得跑到大树下乘凉，伸出了它那长长的红舌头。大树下真是一个快乐的地方。

秋天，树木的叶子都落下来了。小小的树叶像一把把小扇子，飘呀飘呀，落满了大地。秋天，果子都成熟了，果园里有黄黄的梨，红红的苹果，那香味常常会勾住小朋友的脚。

冬天，这里有种很美丽的花，那就是雪花。每当下雪时，美丽的小雪花，随风舞动，就像一朵朵小白花在空中飞舞。下过雪的大地好象披上了雪白的衣裳，美．．．．．．．．．．．．．．丽极了。在雪地里，我们可以堆雪人，打雪仗，快乐极了。

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这就是我的家乡，四季都很美丽。欢迎你来做客呀！

研友总结：英语大作文的写法及历年原创范文

研友总结：英语大作文的写法及历年原

创范文

今天我们来谈谈英语大作文怎么去写。

其实大作文无非就是考察三段式。

inthesecondplace/inthesecondinstance

lastbutnotleast/insummary

注意论据三点有时一下子想不出来，你就可以举例，可以说someexpertpiontsoutthat.../take...ininstance.../accordingtotheinvestigationconductedthisyearindicatesthat.../somestatisticsexposethat...

最后结论：

Inaword,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat...

下面是我自己整理归纳的句子，有很大的兼容性，你只要背熟，自己选自己说着顺口的，不一定全要背出来，到考试的时候，为了展示这些句子，就写出来，写作文的容易一定是我们背过的句子把大展示出来，不是让你就作文写作文，一再强调！

1.asfaras...beconcerned[就...而言]

2.has/haveunpleasantassociationwithsth.[对...没好感]

3.anincreasinglynumberof...[越来越多的...]

4.pointout...[指出]

5.contribute(directly)tosth...[（直接）有助于...]

6.propermeasuresshouldbetakento/greateffortsshouldbemadeto[应采取适当的措施/当努力去做]

7.bequestionedby...[受到质疑]

8.noonecandenythefactthat...[不可否认]

9.arecentinvestigationindicatedthat...[最近一项调查表明]

10.tendtohavefavourableattitudetowardssth...[受到欢迎]

11.turnablindeyeto/turnadeafearto[视而不见/聪而不闻]

12.payaheavypricetodosth.[为做某事付出巨大代价]

13.themostsignificantaspectofsth.[最重要的是]

14.makeitpossibleforsbtodo[使某人做某事成为可能]

15.beobligedtoadmitthefactthat[不得不承认]

16.sparenoefforttodo[不歇余力做某事]

17.theinformationI`vecollectedformanyyearsleadmetobelievethat...[从我这些年所收集的信息使我相信]

18.poseatremendousthreattosth.[给……造成巨大威胁]

19.produceafar-reachinginfluenceonsth.[对……产生巨大影响]

20.liveunderillusion/downtotheearth[生活在幻想中/脚踏实地或面对现实]

以下是历年作文原创范文

2010:

Fromthepictureabove,wecanseeaspical"hotpot"

,whichcontainsmanyuniqueingredients,standfor"LAOSHE","KONGFU","Decompostion"

andsomethingstothateffect.Atthebottomofthepicture,asentencestandsthereextremelyprominent,whichcanbebrielfinterpretedbythisway:culture"hotpot"

isnotonlygoodtastingbutalsostronglygoodforone`shealth.Abitexggeratingpictureis,however,throughcarefulobservation,wemaydiscoverthatbehindthisstrangesenario,whatthecartoonistintendstoshowusisextremelyobvious:thesignificanceofintegrationbetweenChinesecultureandothercountries`culture.

WiththeimplementationoftheChina`sreformandopeningup,anemergingtendencyisthatmoreandmoreforiegnersaregettingfascinatedwithourChineseculture.TheycometoChinatolearnChineselanguage,tastedeliciousChinesefoods,makefriendswithChinesepeople,andetc.Allthesemakethemprettycomfortableandagreeable.Atthesametime,however,thisphenomenonalsostirredaheateddatedinoursociety,so,howtorendertheothercountries`culturebemorecompatiblewithourChineseculturehascausedwidepublicconcern.

AsfarasIamconcerned,beforegivingmyopinionIthinkweshouldtakecloselylookattheculture`sfunctionwidely.Policymakersshouldbemoreawareofthatcultureintegrationnotonlybenefitstoourmakingafurtherdevelopmentbutexertsagreatcontributiontotheworldpeace.

2009:

Asisvigorouslyshowninthephoto,wecanseesomepeoplesittinginfrontoftheirdisksandbeingabsorbingincontrollingtheircomputers.Theexpressionsintheirfaceslookprettyagreaable.Howeverwhatthepictureintriguemeisthattheywereseparatedfromeachotherbyaspiderweb,whichisthemetahporoftheinternetweb.Atthebottomofthepicture,asentence

standsthereprominent,whichcanbebrieflyinterpretedbythisway:internetcontributestobothconnectingandisolatingeachother.Abitexaggeratingthepictureis,butfromobservationseriously,wemayfindthatwhatthecartoonistintendstoshowusisextremelyobvious:thecorrectattitudetowardstheusingofinternet.

Withthescienceandtechnologydevelopment,moreandmorepeople,espicallyyoungstersareusinginternetnow.Withtheinternet,theywillnotbothertogotothelaboray,whentheywanttosearchforsomespecificreferences.Allthethingsentailthemtodoissittinginfrontofthecomputer,andclickingthemouse.Theinformationrangedfromsocialsciencetothemedicialscienceareallavaliableontheinternet.Theycouldalsousesomeuniquevoicefunctionstocontactwithfriendspromptly.Thankstotheinternet.itistheinternethaschangedourlifestylepattern.Weareobligedtoadmitthefactthatinternethasmadeitselfincreasinglybecometheindispensableingredienceofourdailylife.Itdomuchconveniencetous.However,somepeoplenowareworryabouttheinproperusingoftheinternet,whichmaygeneratetremendouslysideeffects.Foronething,usingexcessivelyinternetinfrontofthetablewithlessbodymotionwillstronglydoharmtohealth.Fortheanother,usinginternetdesparatelywillhamperourface-to-facecomnunication.Peoplesoonerorlaterwillfindtheywerealienatedfromeachothergradually.

Tomyopinion,owningtoithasgotbothpositiveandsideeffects,Ithinkweshoulduprightourattitudetowardstheusingofinternetfirst.Theinternetnomorethanaservanttoourlife.weshouldbethehostofourselfratherthanbeingtheslaveroftheinternet.

2008:

Inthecartoonabove,twomencombinedwitheachothercatchmyeyeintriguingly.Bothofthemlackedaleg,howevertheywererunningrepidlyandlefttheirsticksbehind.Atthebottomofthepicture,twosentencesstandthereprominent,whichcanbebrieflyinterpretedbythisway:"bothofusgotoneleg,nevertheless,wecanintegrateintoanorganiztion,sothatwecangoeverwherewewant."Abitinstructivethepictureis.Itisnotdifficulttodeducethatwhatthecartoonistintendstoshowusistheinterdependenceamongthepeople.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthateachpersonhasgothisownfault.Howevertheway,whichpeopletreatwiththeirownshortcomingvaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeopleshowoverpassionateattitudestowardstheirfault.Unfortunately,thisuncorrectattitudeswillstronglyexertnegativeinfluencesontheirbehaviorsandfeelings.Theywillbepessimisticabouteverythingtheyencounter,andcannotwithstandthepressureimposedonthem,evenputanendtotheirlife.While,otherpeopleoftenshowgratitudetoeverythingandacceptthefactthattheyarenotperfect.Theyreckonthatalthoughtheyhavegottheirownshortcoming,theycancometoresorttotheirfriendsforhelpandsupplementwitheachother,theneverythingwillbemucheasier.Fromthis,shortcomingcantransforintoadvantage.Justasthesayinggose:"manyhandsmakelightthing."

Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldputourselvesdowntotheearthanddonotcomplainaboutwhatweweresuffered.Thecrucialpointiswhatcanwedotomakeupforourshortcomingand

makeourlifesmoothintheunpleasantsituation.Oneofbestwaytoovercomeourshortcomingisthatpeoplecometogetherandcombinewitheachother,justlikewhatcartoonistwanttoconveyus.

2007:

Thesaying,"Beingconfidenceofoneselfwillexertextremelybenigninfluencesonone`sfinalsuccess",whichiswidelysharedbymanypeople.Inthepictureabove,however,agoalkeeperandafootballplayerhasdoneabadexampleforus.Asisthepicturedistinctlyshownthatbothofthemstronglyoverestimatedtheiropponent,atthesametime,theydopersonallybelievethatinthepresenceofsucharobustopponent,theyseemtobecomeextremelysmallandnevercantheycombattheopponent,whoarejustinfrontofthem.Abitexaggeratingthepictureis,butaninstructiveone.Itisanottoughtaskforustodeducethatthemessage,whichthecartoonistintendstoconveyusisthemagnitudeoftheconfidence.

Iboldlyguessthatmanypeoplehavegotasameexperiencethatwealwaysinclinetooverestimatethedifficultyweencountered.However,somesocialexpertssuggestthat,theattitudewetreatedwiththedifficultywillexertconsiderableinfluencesonourbehaviors.Aninvestigationconductedbythisyeardramaticallyexposesthatpeoplewithpassionateattitudestowardsthedifficultyseemtobelostintheend.Whilepeoplewhoarefullconfidenceinthemselvesalwaysachievethefinalsuccess.Thisfindinghasstirredaheateddebateamongthepeople.Sohowtodealwiththedifficultywiththecorrectattitude?

AsfarasIamconserned,Ireckonthecrucialpointisthatweshoulduprightourattitudetowardsthedifficultyandbemoreconfidenceinourselves,thenconfrontitwithallourpassionandbrightness.Weshouldbrandthisinstructiveexperienceinourmind,difficultyisnotasstrongaswhatitsurposedtobe.

2006:

Atthefirstglance,Iamstronglyintriguedbythesetwomenabovethepictuce,howfashiontheyare.However,oncarefulobservation,Ichangedmymind.Amanintheleftpicturehadaname,whichisthefamousfootballstar`sname--Beckham,writtenonhisface.Whileinrightpiture,Iamextremelystarledbythemanwhohadspent300RMBonthehaircut,merelyattempttomakehishairliketheBackham`sstyle.Idonotknowwhethertolaughortocry.Abitexaggeratingthepictureis,nevertheless,behindthestrangesenariothemessagewhichthecartoonistintendstoshowusisdistinctlyobvious:don`tfollowthetrendblindly.

Nowadays,manyyoungpeopleinclinetobeinfluencedbysomesuccessfulmanwhohadachievedbigtriumphes.Thesepeopleareinallfildsarrangedfrommoivestartobusinessman.Someyoungstersareundertheimpressionthataslongastheyfollowbythesemen`sbehaviorsorappearances,theywillachievethegoal,too.Nevertheless,someexpertstudyedinsocailphenomenonsuggestthatthissuperficialoutlookwillhaveadramaticallyviciousbearingonyoungsters.Foronething,theyimproperlytaketheircuefromthesesuccessfulmenwithoutpayinganyconsiderableattentiontotheirstudymayleadthemtobelegged.Fortheanother,some

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篇二：【天道原创】天道名师曲凯琨：12月6日托福独立写作题目分析及范文

天道名师曲凯琨：12月6日托福独立写作题目分析及范文12月6日的托福考试已经结束，很多考生对于托福写作内容也有很多讨论。下面是天

道名师曲凯琨就当日的写作题目给出的托福写作解析，希望能为大家解答疑惑。

本文为天道教育培训部名师曲凯琨老师原创，转载请注明出处和作者，违者必究!

曲凯琨老师

【主讲课程】托福写作雅思阅读SAT数学

【老师简介】曾赴英攻读利物浦大学英语教育专业硕士课程，并以

词汇类题目，认为老师引起学生对一门学科兴趣最好的方式是通过解释它在学校以外的地方是如何帮助学生的，所以，基于便于论证的角度，建议考生最好持不同意的态度，给出以下参考思路：

主观点：不同意

让步：讲解学科在生活的实际用处可能会引起学生对学习此科目的兴趣，但有其他方法可能也会达到这种目的并且比这种方法好

分论点1：老师可以通过让学生增进对学科了解和熟悉来增加他们的兴趣

分论点2：老师可以通过改变教学方法增加学生的兴趣

范文：

Educationhasbecomeoneofthehotissuesdrawingtheattentionofmodernpeopleespeciallythosewhorelatetothatoccupationthatisteacherswhoareconsideredtobeinfluentialintermsofpromotingthequalityofschooling,andduringthatprocessonetopic,howtoarousetheinterestofstudentsinlearning,hasbeenstudiedanddebatedfordecades.Althoughtheintroductionofthepracticalvalueofmasteringasubjectmightbeuseful,Idonotbelievethatitcouldbethebestapproachandthereareothereffectivewaystointriguestudents’interestsinpursuingasubject.

Itshouldbeadmittedthatteachersmightbesuccessfulinattractingstudents’interestsinanacademicsubjectthroughtalkingaboutthehelpitcanofferinthedailylife.Studentsarelikelytobeappealingtoasubjectsincetheyrealizetheknowledgetheylearninthatclasscouldfacilitatethemtosolveactualproblemsinthereality,whichmeanstheexplanationabouthowitworkscouldpromotetheirdesiretolearnthesubject.However,thereareothermethodsteacherscanexploreinordertoencouragetheattractionofstudentstocertainsubjects,whichmightbemoreeffectivethandisplayingthebenefitsoftheknowledgeinthesociety.Thosewaysincludefamiliarizingstudentswiththesubjectandimprovingteachingskills,whichcouldberegardedasthesignificantelementintermsofintriguingtheinterestinessence.Therefore,itmightnotbethebestwayforteacherstomotivatestudentstoacquiretheknowledgeinaspecificsubjectbypresentingtheirfunctionsinthesociety.

Moreover,thefamiliarizationofasubjectcouldencouragestudentstodeveloptheirinterest,whichmighttriumphoverexpressingitsfunction.Teacherscanemploymultiplemethodsincludingpresentingthetheoreticsystemofthecontents,

showingrelatedmoviesorTVprograms,andvisitingmuseumstoachievethesituationthatstudentscanbewellexposedtothesubject,whichcouldadvancetheir

understandingandperceptionaboutthesubject.Thenthestudentsmightobtainthefeelingsaboutthatsubjectanddeveloptheirdesireoflovingaswellasexploringthatsubject.Forinstance,studentsmightestablishtheirinterestinphysicsfromwatchingTVprogramssuchastheDiscoveryChannel,whichsharessimilaritytothecaseofSheldonintheBigBangTheory,anAmericansitcom,whodedicateshimselftophysicsbecauseofaTVshowaboutphysicsexperimentshesaw.ThatevidentlyindicatestheinfluenceoftheexposuretoacertainsubjectsuchasTVshows,andthusteacherscanusethisapproachthatistohavestudentsbefamiliarwiththesubjectinordertoarousetheirinterest.

Inaddition,itisprobablyamoreeffectivewayforteacherstoenhancetheirteachingmethodsinordertoattracttheirstudentstolearn.Advancedteachingskillsinvolvinginteractiveteachingsuchasintroducinggames,discussions,groupwork,androle-playinsteadoftraditionalwayofpresentingknowledgebyteachersthemselvescanaddvarietyofteachingmodestotheclassroom,whichcouldbehelpfulinpromotingtheactiveparticipationofstudentsinlearningandthenincreasethepossibilityofstudentsinfascinatingthesubject.Forexample,astudentcouldchangehisorherattitudetowardliteraturewhichnormallyisacourseperformedbytheteacherexplainingobscuretermsandsentencesfromfeelingboringtolikingitthroughtakingpartintheplayofHamletdirectedbytheEnglishteacherinclass.Thatchangeimprovestheinvolvementofstudentsintheclassaswellastheirinterestinthetopicoftheclass.Therefore,teacherscanhelpstudentstoestablishtheirpassionaboutasubjectfromchangingtheirteachingmethodsinclass.

Inconclusion,althoughpresentingtheactualusageintherealitymighthelpstudentsfallinginlovewithasubject,thereareotherwayscontaining

familiarizingthemwiththesubjectandincreasingthediversityofteachingtechniques.Therefore,itcouldnotbethebestwayforteacherstopromotetheenthusiasmofstudentsaboutonesubjectbystatingitsmeritsoutofschool.以上就是天道名师曲凯琨所给出的2014年12月6日托福考试写作题目的相关分析，希望能够为学子解惑，也希望能帮助将要考托福的学生提高写作成绩。

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篇三：雅思写作辩论类大作文范文-新东方郑仁强,雅思故我在(2010-10-20162027)

雅思写作辩论类大作文范文-新东方郑仁强，雅思故我在

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注意：这里提供的范文只是为了让各位同学更加直观地明白雅思辩论类大作文的整体脉络结构，里面的模板不可照搬使用（因为部分已经过时）。另外，主体段的扩展没有给出，结论段只给了核心的立场表达部分。也就是说，这里的范文并非真正意义上的范文，这里的范文只是开头+结尾+每个主体段的主题句（中心句）。为什么不给真正完整的范文呢？一是为了防止抄袭，二是为了避免各位万一碰到和范文类似的题目而写出雷同作文的尴尬。另外这里的范文仅限自己使用，（针对某些不要脸的同行）不可无耻地据为己有（欢迎转载，但要注明出处）。否则一经发现抄袭，强哥会很生气，后果会很严重（因为以强哥的铜牙俐齿和狼一般的凶狠和耐力，必将一直将抄袭者追袭到底，如果不想下半辈子没脸活着，就不要来这犯贱！另外强哥的眼线遍布网络，千万不要担心你的罪行不会被发现。）

辩论类的雅思大作文分成三种，分别是：同意或不同意，讨论两方面观点，利弊分析。

下面是一篇“同意或不同意”题型的范文（2009年4月18日）

开头

Theissueofadvertisinghasbeenpaidmoreattentionbythepublicthaneverbefore.Itisarguedthatadvertisingisuselessandonlyatypeofrecreation.Overall,Idisagreewiththisopinion.

主体段

Firstly,nobodywoulddisagreethatadvertisementscanprovideconsumerswithinformation

concerningcommodities.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Besides,advertisementsareimportantforenterprisestopromotethepopularityoftheirproducts.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Nevertheless,itisanundeniablefactthatsomeadvertisementsencourageconsumerstobuyonawhim.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

结尾

Toconclude,Irestatemyviewthatadvertisingplaysanessentialroleinsocietyanditisnotonlyatypeofamusementforindividuals.(后面可以写点总结，反思或展望之类的话语，以便本段写够40个字)

下面是一篇“讨论两方面观点”题型的范文（2009年2月28日）

开头

Thediscussionaboutsolutionstoimprovepublichealthhassparkedwideconcerninrecentyears.Somepeopleclaimthatsportsfacilitiesshouldbemademoreavailabletothepublic.However,otherstaketheviewthatitservesnousefulpurposeandotheractionsshouldbetaken.Inthisessay,Iwillanalyzethesetwoviews.

主体段

Firstly,itisawell-knownfactthattopromoteahealthylifestylewillprobablybringahostofbenefitstopeople’sheath.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Also,itisagoodideaforustoenhancethequalityofmedicalservices.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Ontheotherhand,increasingthenumberofsportsfacilitiesprovidescitizenswithahigheraccesstosportingactivities.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

结尾

Takingallthefactorsintoconsideration,Imaintainthatotherwaysarestilldesiredeventhoughincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilitiesisofsomeimportancetotheimprovementofpublichealth.(后面可以写点总结，反思或展望之类的话语，以便本段写够40个字)

下面是一篇“利弊分析”题型的范文（2009年3月14日）

开头

Currently,anincreasingnumberofstudentsdecidetostudyabroadfortertiaryeducation.Inthisarticle,Iintendtocomparethebenefitsanddrawbacksofthisdevelopment.

主体段

Firstofall,itisanindisputablefactthatstudyingabroadisofconsiderablesignificanceto

broadeningourhorizons.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Moreover,studyingoverseashelpsustocommandtheuseofaforeignlanguage.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

Onthenegativeside,thehighcostofstudyingabroadmayimposeaburdentofamily.(后面还应有扩展，以便本段写够60-70个字，为什么不给扩展的原因请参看范文前的说明)

结尾

Inconclusion,itisclearthattheadvantagesofstudyingoverseasforhighereducationoutweighitsdisadvantages.(后面可以写点总结，反思或展望之类的话语，以便本段写够40个字)

高中作文